Chapter 5: Eight O'Clock


Derek Okafor's office was on the fourteenth floor of a building in Midtown, with a view of the skyline and bookshelves that ran floor to ceiling on two walls.
He was a compact man in his early forties with close-cropped hair and the kind of stillness that made you feel that nothing you said would surprise him.
Bianca arrived seven minutes after us.
She wore no jewelry and carried a large canvas tote bag.
She sat across from Derek without looking at me.
Derek spread the folder contents across his conference table and read in silence for eleven minutes.
No one spoke.
Then he set down the last page and said: "Walk me through Clause 14C."
Marcus explained what Raymond had told us.
Derek made notes.
"And you," Derek said, turning to Bianca.
"Tell me about the papers Dominic asked you to sign."
Bianca reached into her tote and placed a stack of documents on the table.
"He brought them to Christmas dinner two years ago.
He said it was a passive investment vehicle — that my name would be on the ownership register for tax efficiency reasons.
He said I'd never have to do anything."
"Did you read the documents before you signed?"
A pause.
"He said they were standard.
I trusted him."
"Did he tell you what assets the vehicle would hold?"
"No."
"Did he tell you the vehicle would be used to purchase residential mortgage notes?"
"No."
"Did he tell you those notes would then have their repayment terms restructured through a secondary addendum in a way that could cause the borrower to default?"
Bianca's jaw tightened.
"If he had told me that, I would not have signed."
Derek looked at her for a moment.
Then he turned back to his notepad.
"I need you to understand something," he said, addressing both of us.
"What I'm reading in these documents represents, at minimum, three distinct legal problems for Caldwell Properties.
First: the addendum modification was not properly disclosed to the borrower under Georgia's residential lending statutes.
Second: the payment routing — holding funds without applying them to principal — constitutes a potential breach of the servicer's fiduciary duty.
Third: the internal communications Raymond provided suggest this was not an isolated error.
It was deliberate."
"Can they be stopped?" I asked.
"They can be stopped, and they can be held accountable." Derek put his pen down.
"But I want to tell you what happens if we move correctly versus incorrectly.
If we file a complaint tomorrow, Dominic's attorneys will have the note transferred within forty-eight hours and we spend the next two years in litigation chasing a paper trail.
If we build the case first — get Raymond's testimony formalized, preserve the internal communications, file a simultaneous complaint with the Georgia Department of Banking and Finance and the Consumer Financial Protection Bureau — the note gets frozen as part of an active regulatory investigation.
Blue Lantern can't transfer it.
They can't call it due.
And your mother's home is protected while the case proceeds."
He looked at me directly.
"It takes three to four weeks to do it right."
"Three to four weeks," I repeated.
"During which time you make no payments to Blue Lantern.
You make payments into an escrow account I will set up, which demonstrates good faith and protects you from any default claim.
The paper trail shows you were not delinquent — they were predatory."
The baby moved.
I pressed my hand to my side under the table.
"What about Vivian?" Marcus asked.
"Your mother's fingerprints are on the original strategy — she told your wife to ask her about the debt, which shows she knew what Blue Lantern held.
But her direct legal exposure depends on whether she directed the addendum modification or simply benefited from it." He paused.
"That's a distinction we'll clarify during discovery."
Marcus was quiet for a moment.
"She humiliated my wife in front of the family using a debt that her company manufactured.
I want that on record."
"It will be," Derek said.
"Every piece of it."
Bianca had not spoken for several minutes.
She was looking at the documents in front of her — specifically at the page where her name appeared as beneficial owner of Blue Lantern Holdings.
"What happens to me?" she asked quietly.
"If your account of events is accurate, and the documents support it, you are a victim of your brother's scheme, not a perpetrator." Derek looked at her steadily.
"But I will need your complete cooperation.
Every document he gave you.
Every conversation you can remember.
Every text message."
She nodded once.
"Bianca," I said.
She looked at me for the first time since she'd sat down.
"Did your mother know Dominic was using your name?"
A long pause.
Her hands were flat on the table.
"I don't know," she said.
"But I know she didn't stop him."
That answer sat in the room for a moment.
May you like
Derek picked up his pen.
"Let's get to work."