Chapter 5: The Woman Outside
I read the message twice.
Amanda was watching my face.
She could tell something had shifted, but she couldn't see the screen.
"Who is it?" she said.
I didn't answer.
I typed back: *How did you get this number?*
The reply came in seconds.
*Amanda's file.
She kept everything.
That was her first mistake.*
I looked up at Amanda.
"Did you keep a file on me?"
She blinked.
"What?"
"A physical file.
Documents.
My number, my address, my financial records."
Something moved behind her eyes.
Fast.
Gone.
"I don't know what you're talking about," she said.
I was already moving toward the staircase.
"Daniel—"
"Marcus," I said without turning around, "don't leave this floor."
I don't know why he listened.
But when I glanced back from the top of the stairs, he was still standing there.
The lobby of the venue was full of guests who had drifted from their seats.
I kept my head down, moved through a side corridor, and pushed out through the service exit into the car park.
A woman was standing near the far end.
Fifties, grey coat, sensible shoes.
She was holding a manila envelope and she looked like she hadn't slept.
"Carol Simms?" I said.
"Yes." She held out the envelope immediately, like she'd been waiting to get rid of it.
"I want you to know I didn't understand the full picture until last week.
When I did, I couldn't—" She stopped.
"Just read it."
I opened the envelope.
Inside was a printed email chain.
At the top, Amanda's personal email address.
The recipient was a solicitor's office — not mine.
A firm I'd never heard of.
The subject line read: *Re: Hale-Reeves Property Acquisition — Contingency Exit.*
I read the first paragraph.
The plan had two stages.
Stage one: marriage and property transfer.
Stage two — if the transfer was challenged or delayed — a spousal claim filed within thirty days of the ceremony.
Amanda didn't need me to sign the papers willingly.
She just needed to be my wife.
"She told Marcus the signature was a formality," Carol said.
"That even if you refused to sign after the wedding, the spousal claim would cover it.
She'd get half the property value in a settlement.
She'd already spoken to a family law specialist."
I looked up from the page.
"She had two exits," Carol said.
"Either you sign on the day, or she files within the month and takes half anyway."
The car park was quiet.
Somewhere inside, I could hear voices — guests murmuring, uncertain, waiting.
"Why are you telling me this?" I said.
Carol pulled her coat tighter.
"I have a daughter.
She's eight." She paused.
"When Amanda mentioned the child — your daughter — she called her a complication.
Said the girl was too attached and might cause problems on the day." She looked at me steadily.
"I should have walked away then.
I didn't.
I'm walking away now."
I looked back at the envelope.
"Will you testify to this?" I said.
"In writing, yes.
In person, I need to speak to my own solicitor first."
"That's fair," I said.
She nodded.
Started to turn away.
"Carol," I said.
She stopped.
"Thank you."
She didn't answer.
She walked to a grey car at the edge of the lot, got in, and drove away without looking back.
I stood there for a moment with the envelope in my hand.
Sophie was inside.
Ray was inside.
A hundred and twelve people were inside, sitting in rows with programs on their laps and flowers on every table, waiting for a wedding that was never going to happen.
I walked back through the service door.
Amanda was at the bottom of the interior staircase when I came back through the corridor.
She had come down.
She was standing very still, watching the door I'd just walked through.
"Who was outside?" she said.
"Someone who kept better records than you expected," I said.
Her face didn't move.
But her hand — the one holding her small bridal clutch — tightened until her knuckles went pale.
"Whatever they told you," she said, "they're lying."
"Her name is Carol Simms," I said.
"She worked with you and Marcus for four months.
She has the email chain.
She has the contingency plan."
The clutch dropped from Amanda's hand.
It hit the marble floor and neither of us picked it up.
"You had two exits," I said.
"The signature today, or the spousal claim after.
You didn't need me to trust you.
You just needed me to say *I do.*"
She stared at me.
"You were never in love with me," I said.
It wasn't a question.
I wasn't even angry when I said it.
I was just stating a fact, the way you'd read an address off a piece of paper.
Amanda's chin lifted.
Her voice, when it came, was very quiet.
"You'll never prove intent," she said.
"A paralegal with a grudge and a phone found by a child.
That's what you have."
"I also have your voice," I said.
"Recorded.
Played from your own phone."
She went very still.
"And I have Marcus upstairs," I said.
"And I think, if someone explains his legal exposure clearly enough, he'll have quite a lot to say."
For the first time since I'd walked into that bridal suite, Amanda looked uncertain.
It lasted only a second.
Then she straightened, reached down, picked up her clutch from the floor, and said: "I'd like to speak to my solicitor."
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"You can do that from outside," I said.
"You're not a guest here anymore."
